direct dialogue

in writing we have been learning to make our writing more effective

here is an example of dialogue so we had to add dialogue to a film with no sound. by only the pictures we added dialogue. and the story was called Ruckus it was a story of two brothers called bob and Jeffrey that wanted to steel a gem.

here is my 4 lines of direct dialogue.

“I want that gem” shouted bob

“Nooo! I want it” yelled Jeffrey

“I’m going to take it first” yelled Bob

“oh no you wont” responded  Jeffrey.

target number game

 

 

every morning we play the target number game.

something I like about it is that this is it helps with math’s

something I find challenging about it is that you have to get to one number by + – x

 

today, this is how I got close to the target:

10-2=8×100=800-75+6-25=706 one off the target.

I want to improve on getting zero off the target.