A Mouse In A Wall

 

Once there lived a mouse in a wall. This photo reminds me of me playing hide and seek. And I hid in a gap in a bush. And one of my friends where counting. And some one else was hiding with me. And at one point the seeker was walking right next to us. But he saw one of us. And he had tears running down his face. So, I ran and hid some were else. So, I found a bush and hid in it. And no one found me for a while. until someone else walked next to me.

direct dialogue

in writing we have been learning to make our writing more effective

here is an example of dialogue so we had to add dialogue to a film with no sound. by only the pictures we added dialogue. and the story was called Ruckus it was a story of two brothers called bob and Jeffrey that wanted to steel a gem.

here is my 4 lines of direct dialogue.

“I want that gem” shouted bob

“Nooo! I want it” yelled Jeffrey

“I’m going to take it first” yelled Bob

“oh no you wont” responded  Jeffrey.

target number game

 

 

every morning we play the target number game.

something I like about it is that this is it helps with math’s

something I find challenging about it is that you have to get to one number by + – x

 

today, this is how I got close to the target:

10-2=8×100=800-75+6-25=706 one off the target.

I want to improve on getting zero off the target.