direct dialogue

in writing we have been learning to make our writing more effective

here is an example of dialogue so we had to add dialogue to a film with no sound. by only the pictures we added dialogue. and the story was called Ruckus it was a story of two brothers called bob and Jeffrey that wanted to steel a gem.

here is my 4 lines of direct dialogue.

“I want that gem” shouted bob

“Nooo! I want it” yelled Jeffrey

“I’m going to take it first” yelled Bob

“oh no you wont” responded  Jeffrey.

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